Good little poems. Thought of saying that limericks would look good with lines 1,2, and 5 rhyming, while the lines 3,4 also rhymes. AABBA style. Once the theme is ready it can be fun to make the lines rhyme as in limericks.

Just saying because I had also tried limericks and can be fun and less resistive to write sometimes. ☺

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